Just got the latest RAAus email news and I offer the following edits:
"RAAus is proud to announce"...naaa, "pleased to announce" is better. Save pride for important things.
"in a Super Petrol amphibian"...naaa, it's Petrel.
The newsletter is fine, these are very minor niggles, but why wouldn't a communication like this get a final edit?
Or am I too picky?